Ms. Cabel - Archived 09/19 Notes

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Posted: October 31, 2011

Happy Halloween!! Grade eleven, your assignment due date is extended to Wednesday.  Grade ten, continue drafting your piece of flash fiction (try to include some conventional artistry).

Posted: October 27, 2011

English 112: Today we had a fabulous whole class discussion about "The Most Dangerous Game".  I gave an assignment to be done on the story.  The assignment focuses on two skills: quotation identification and creating graphic organizers for note-taking.  It is due on Tuesday.  I am not here tomorrow, however, I'll be back on Monday.  You can ask me questions about the assignment then.  See the attachment for the assignment.   English 10: Storyboards were due today.  Today we wrote a snapshot moment from our storyboard and talked about proper use of quotation marks.  Continue working on your drafts tomorrow with the supply teacher.
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Posted: October 26, 2011

English 112: Please finish reading "The Most Dangerous Game" by Richard Connell.  Students have received copies of the story, but if you were absent, I am attaching a web link with the full text of the story.  We will be doing some very important follow-up activities with the story.   English 10: Make sure that your storyboards are completed for tomorrow's class.

Posted: October 19, 2011

English 112: Don't forget your homework tomorrow.  Complete a two page double spaced reflection on the following question:  In "Lamb to the Slaughter", how does the author create both the seen and unseen characterstics of Mary Maloney.  You must use quotes to support.  Remember that the graphic organizers you created are a great prewriting tool for this assignment.   English 10: We worked on the reading comprehension skill of determining importance today.  Students searched through the text of "The Pit and the Pendulum" to find words that connected to the human feelings of fear, obsession, anticipation, and helplessness.  The next step is to choose one of those words and complete one of the following activities:  a) text-to-self connection: put that word as the title at the top of your page.  Write a one page double spaced piece that describes a time in your life when you experienced this emotion. b) text-to-text connection: Think about your word and find another text that reminds you of that emotion.  The text could be a song, poem, picture, movie, story, etc.  Write a half page piece explaining why the text you have chosen connects with the word from our story. c) text-to-world connection: Think about your word and how it connects to something that is happening in the world, in your community, or in your school.  This piece should be one page double spaced. d) If you enjoy drawing, you can create a visualization of the word.  Remember that tone is essential. Assignment is due on Monday.

Posted: October 17, 2011

Writing 110: We are all very excited about our narrative project based learning unit.  We are teaming up with Gretna Green Elementary School - our students will be going into the school to share storybooks and teach lesson plans on writing.  The outline of the unit is attached.  Students are currently in the planning stages of the project. English 112: Today we started to think metaphorically about character.  Using the character of Mary Maloney, students created an iceberg graphic organizer to demonstrate Mary's seen and unseen characteristics.  For tomorrow, the metaphorical sketches must be completed. English 10: Students were given time today to work on comprehension questions on "The Pit and the Pendulum".  The questions are due on Wednesday.
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Posted: October 13, 2011

English 112: QW - we watched a video from 1949 entitled "Dating Dos and Don'ts", then students created their own list of dating dos and don'ts for today's teens.  After the QW, we learned about the context of our story, "Lamb to the Slaughter".  We also read the short story.  Over the next couple of classes, we will be analyzing the story, particularly the main character, Mary Maloney.  I am adding an online text of the story (check web links). English 10: QW - Write about a memorable moment from the point of view of another person who was there.  Today I gave you class time to work on the "Sentry" comprehension questions and creative extension which are due tomorrow.  

Posted: October 12, 2011

Writing 110: Today you received a copy of your rubric for the extended narrative.  Be sure to fill in the blank spaces with criteria that you want to be marked on.  The final copy for your narrative is due on Tuesday. English 112: We followed up the close reading of "Home Smart Home" with a group activity, where you had to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this type of technology.  We had a great whole class discussion.  Tomorrow, we will be moving on to our next story, "Lamb to the Slaughter". English 10: Today we read the short story "Sentry".  We completed pre-reading and during-reading activities to work on our predicting skills.  A post-reading assignment on "Sentry" is due on Friday.

Posted: October 11, 2011

Writing 110: Continue to revise your narratives.  Complete your independent corrections sheet to hand in with your final copy. English 112: Read the excerpt from the article "Home Smart Home".  Highlight any parts of the article that relate to your reading focus - Does technology make life harder or easier for humans?  Be sure to write important points in the margins.

Posted: October 7, 2011

Writing 110: Please complete the drafts of your extended narratives for Tuesday. English 112: Today we analyzed the poem by Sara Teasdale, "There Will Come Soft Rains", which is featured in our most recent short story.  For Tuesday, write a half page comparitive piece outlining the thematic similarities between the poem and the story.

Posted: October 5, 2011

Writing 110: Over the past few days, we have been looking at the differences between writing plot-based stories and thematic-based stories.  Also, today, we spoke about creative use of dialogue and punctuation to add voice to our characters.  Continue working on your extended narratives.   English 112: Today we read "August 2026: There Will Come Soft Rains", a science fiction piece by Ray Bradbury.  We will be working cooperatively over the next two days to figure out the themes in this story and connect them to the real world.  Also, students received their first "One Pager" today, which needs to be completed for Friday.  This assignment is to be completed on your silent reading book.   English 10: Today we read "The Sniper" by Liam O'Flaherty.  We completed open mind portraits, which helps to fine tune our visualization skills.  We visualized what the sniper was thinking about in the middle of the story, and then again at the end.  We will be doing follow up activities over the next few days.  
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Posted: October 3, 2011

English 112: Today we talked more about the real world connections within the short story "The Lottery".  Students are completing a theme layers chart, which asks them to compare one of the themes of the story with themselves, their family, their community, and their nation.  This is due for tomorrow.   English 10: Please finish the thematic paragraph on your song of choice.  It is due on Wednesday.  Also, tomorrow we will be completing the OCA (Ontario Comprehension Assessment), which allows me to assess the strengths and weaknesses of each student's reading comprehension skills. Homework for Wednesday:  Using a song of your choice, write a 1/4 page -1/2 page response where you:   1. state the name of the artist and the title of the song (in quotation marks) 2. state what you feel the theme of the song is and why 3. use two to three phrases from the song to prove your point of view (be sure to put the phrases in quotation marks)   *Don't forget to use complete sentences, with proper conventions!    

Posted: September 30, 2011

Writing 110: Writers notebooks were collected today.  Also, we placed our snapshot moments into our writing portfolios with a reflection card.  We are continuing to work on our extended narratives. English 112: Today we discussed the group questions that you were given in yesterday's class.  We also watched the video adaptation of "The Lottery".  I will put the youtube links on the website. Englishs 10: We talked about theme today, and used songs as a prompt for writing thematic paragraphs with quotations.  You may bring in your own song for Monday's class so we can further practice this skill.

Posted: September 26, 2011

Writing 110: We have been continuing our work on the extended narrative.  Students are working on their storyboards and writing snapshots from their storyboards.   English 112: I collected the satire assignments today.  Remember, it's 10% per each day that the assignment is late.  Students were given a new assignment today on "The Lottery Ticket" (p. 198 Echoes).  I gave a mini-lesson on how to properly incorporate quotations in your responses.  This is the assignment: “The Lottery Ticket” by Anton Chekhov Answer the following questions on looseleaf.  All answers should be paragraph length responses AND incorporate quotations. 1.      Chekhov’s story can be considered as a satire.  What is the story satirizing?  What are two attributes of satire that are evident in the story and how are they used? 2.      Find the place in the story where the narrative switches from past tense to present tense.  Why does the narrator change the tense at that point? 3.      The narrator does not give much insight into the wife’s actual thoughts in this story.  Make an inference, and state what you believe the wife was thinking.  Be sure to support with evidence from the text. 4.      Imagine that at the end of the story, the couple had won the lottery.  What do you predict that would mean for their family? English 10: Today we reviewed plot structure.  Tomorrow we will be reading our first short story - "Charles" by Shirley Jackson.

Posted: September 22, 2011

Writing 110: We have moved on to extended narrative, and we are playing around with place narrative as a genre for our next piece.  We are currently in the prewriting process, and have been experimenting with sketches and storyboards to help us generate ideas.  Remember that your snapshot moments are due tomorrow.   English 112: Today we read the short story "The Lottery Ticket" on page 198 of the Echoes text.  We did some pre-reading activities that focused on satire.  The following assignment is due on Monday: Find a pop culture example of satire and complete the following assignment.  This should be written in essay format and should be two pages double spaced in length: 1. include a short summary of the source2. state the definition of satire3. refer to how at least three elements of satire are used in the source4. comment on the criticism of a literary work/person/society that is satirized in the source   English 10: We have started our short story unit.  Don't forget that your personal narratives are due tomorrow.

Posted: September 20, 2011

Writing 110: Today we talked about the revision process and students were given rubrics for their snapshot moments.  There is a blank section of the rubric that they need to personalize - it should be something that the students want me to mark them on individually.  The final copy of your snapshot is due on Friday.  We will be starting extended narratives in class tomorrow.   English 112: We looked at satire today and also worked on our note-taking skills.  Tomorrow, we will continue with the concept of satire, to enhance our understanding of the genre.   English 10: Today we focused on the revision process.  Final copies of your narratives are due on Friday.  You must hand in all rough copy work with your narratives (it counts for marks).  Below you will find a copy of the rubric for your narrative.
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